On Latent Talents

Loss of creative skills implied
     a soul has died,
     leaving bereft
     those who are left.

Latent talents youth unexplored
     may be restored
     in later years,
     no undue fears

Lest a waiting world be refused
     future recused
     nothing gainful,
     loss is painful.

THIRD PLACE WINNER
written July 17, 2021
submitted to "12 Lines in Rhyme" Poetry Contest
sponsored by Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 7/27/2021 10:19:00 AM
Congrats and high fives for your win Milt! So many think that if they don't follow their gifts in their youth those gifts are lost to them forever! I love to see people start to play the piano, take up a new hobby, write or do something they always wanted to do outside of their "youthful" years kicking aside that sense of loss - filling their lives with new found joy. Well spoken!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/27/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam, and what you say is so true. Thanks for your thought-provoking comment on my poem.
Date: 7/26/2021 12:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win Milton, Nicely penned..
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2021 12:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph. I really enjoyed writing for your contest.
Date: 7/26/2021 10:31:00 AM
Hi L. Milton, Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2021 11:53:00 AM
Thanks, Alexis, looks like I slipped in under the wire! LOL
Date: 7/26/2021 10:21:00 AM
Nothing gainful, loss is painful - Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/26/2021 11:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Christuraj.
Date: 7/18/2021 5:33:00 PM
Well done. "Loss of creative skills implied a soul has died" - I had never thought of this, but it makes incredible sense.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/18/2021 5:42:00 PM
Hmmm...well every now and then I come up with something that "makes incredible sense." I guess that was it for this year?
Date: 7/17/2021 11:24:00 AM
Very good verse, Milton, insightful and with an impactful message. Have a great day and weekend, my friend.
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Date: 7/17/2021 11:44:00 AM
Thanks, Lasaad. I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for your thoughtful and kind comment. You have a great weekend, too, my friend.
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