On Latent Talents

Loss of creative skills implied
     a soul has died,
     leaving bereft
     those who are left.

Latent talents youth unexplored
     may be restored
     in later years,
     no undue fears

Lest a waiting world be refused
     future recused
     nothing gainful,
     loss is painful.

THIRD PLACE WINNER
written July 17, 2021
submitted to "12 Lines in Rhyme" Poetry Contest
sponsored by Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Congrats and high fives for your win Milt! So many think that if they don't follow their gifts in their youth those gifts are lost to them forever! I love to see people start to play the piano, take up a new hobby, write or do something they always wanted to do outside of their "youthful" years kicking aside that sense of loss - filling their lives with new found joy. Well spoken!
Hankins Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Thank you so much, Sam, and what you say is so true. Thanks for your thought-provoking comment on my poem.
May Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 12:40 PM
Congrats on your win Milton, Nicely penned..
Hankins Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 12:46 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph. I really enjoyed writing for your contest.
Y. Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Hi L. Milton, Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Hankins Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Thanks, Alexis, looks like I slipped in under the wire! LOL
Alex Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Nothing gainful, loss is painful - Beautiful write. Congratulations on your win.
Hankins Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Thanks so much, Christuraj.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 5:33 PM
Well done. "Loss of creative skills implied a soul has died" - I had never thought of this, but it makes incredible sense.
Hankins Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 5:42 PM
Hmmm...well every now and then I come up with something that "makes incredible sense." I guess that was it for this year?
Poet Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Very good verse, Milton, insightful and with an impactful message. Have a great day and weekend, my friend.
Hankins Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 11:44 AM
Thanks, Lasaad. I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for your thoughtful and kind comment. You have a great weekend, too, my friend.
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