Deborah Burch Poet Rhyme

On Journeys of the Heart

On Journeys Of The Heart


Lost and wandering in the dark
Bereft of any map or mark
Futile efforts fail at embark
On journeys of the heart.

Vain travailings silent, unheard
Are bound beneath unspoken words
Repressing what could still be stirred
On journeys of the heart.

Still faint intrepid thoughts unfurl
Mangled within a broken world
Pacing relentless in this pearl
On journeys of the heart.

3/4/2012©deborah burch

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Caribbean Seawolf May 2, 2012 at 9:01 PM Indeed the rimester ye be... thoughts to pen set free....

Kash Poet April 16, 2012 at 10:17 PM Very insightful poem by you.Congrats on your win.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.

Carol Sunshine Brown April 16, 2012 at 12:51 PM Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Brian sponsored "XII". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Deborah. Love, Carol

Charles Henderson April 12, 2012 at 12:18 PM writing end rhyme is very hard for me without it getting sing songy. But your refrain has taken most of that away. I would say this is about as good a balance as i have seen for rhyme yet subdueing it to an acceptable level. I think I will try a few like this if I can come up with some good theme. thank you for postisng Deborah Burch April 12, 2012 at 12:37 PM thank you Charles...I am honoured...I am anxious to see the results...very best wishes, huggs,love deb

Jack Horne April 11, 2012 at 7:20 AM lovely write, my friend. many congrats on your wins Deborah Burch April 11, 2012 at 8:11 AM Thank you for your kindness, Jack...big hugs,love debs