On Jesus' Birthday - Haiku

On Jesus’ Birthday 

Gifts He does not ask
While we get all the presents
All He wants is us

by Jean McLoughlin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 7:17 AM
Truth so profound expressed in simple words. Great!
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:23 AM
thank you so much for reading Jo and for your kind words. Best wishes, from Jean
Flannery Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 2:09 PM
So true, all He wants is us! So much said in just one little haiku. God Bless.
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Oh thank you Vincent, and thank God for all the wonderful gifts He gives us. Blessings. Jean
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 3:41 AM
Neatly done Jean! A point well taken... Best wishes, Keith
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 5:25 AM
Thank you Keith, you're very kind. Blessings. Jean
Walker Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Nice..
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Thanks Susan
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