On Ice (Footle)

Fall down
New Frown

Or 

Fall down
Now Clown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 10:48 AM
You cracked me up with this one Michael - I am one who is prone to get his clown on with people - Great job - God Bless, MJ
 Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 9:07 AM
Got a good chuckle out of this one. Life is a matter of perspective isn't it. Thanks for the day brightener! Karen
Richards Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 7:44 AM
Cute.....this would describe me on ice skates....such a klutz!! (or is it clutz???) :) Carrie
Strand Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 7:33 AM
Like the second one best Michael.Rgds Brian
Atanacio Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 6:27 AM
I'm waiting too LOL.. Nice
Omaidin Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 6:00 AM
Great stuff..........pick up. Déirdre
Higgins Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 5:59 AM
Good job with this piece.
Kelly Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 4:43 AM
Large Cut .... On Butt ..... Please don't tell me to put some ice on it , Michael !! Great double footle .....
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