On High Waves

upsurge of surfers - on carousel of high waves rides their flamboyance
Date: 09/18/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 10:21 AM
awesome imagery!!
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October 29, 2017 at 11:06 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Roper Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Great poem Hugs Eve ~`*
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October 28, 2017 at 11:26 PM
Thanks Eve.
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 9:20 AM
A nice Senryu
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October 8, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Thank you, Tim.
Daniel Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Rich imagery, Afzal:) great haiku:)
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October 8, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Thank you, Jo
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September 23, 2017 at 12:17 PM
I agree w/the other talented poets/poetesses ... a beautifully expressed Haiku, Afzal. Your adept pen speak in celestial tones. On carousel of high waves rides their flamboyance ... this is such a shimmering phrase of rich imagery. A masterfully crafted poem, my friend. Pure poetry. Love and more love always.
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September 27, 2017 at 11:10 PM
Thank you very much for such a generous compliment, Freddie.
One Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 5:19 AM
Great haiku Afzal
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September 27, 2017 at 11:09 PM
Thanks S.O.
Williams Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Lot of imagery in three short lines Afzal. Haiku at its best...Maria
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September 23, 2017 at 1:53 AM
Thank you, Maria.
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September 18, 2017 at 11:43 AM
Cracking word in conjunction with the Haiku's sentiment..."Flamboyance" - Love it! All my very best regards as always, Afzal. :) john
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September 23, 2017 at 1:53 AM
Thank you, John.
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