On Faring Well

Sun, guess you're havin' nuff fun
doin' whatcha have done
through the ages

Me, I'll tread treacherously
through hills and valleys
barefoot and faith-filled, by golly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 4:08 PM
What a lovely way to express this, Nancy. Very deep
Osita Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Very nice as usual. Have a nice day, nancy
Lane Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 6:53 AM
The sun has a very much different vantage point I think. Tony
Minardi Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 1:34 AM
Wow, this is intersting, Nancy. I should read more of your poem. Thanks for my HM in your contest. Finally, that poem get something it deserves... Thank you.. i'm so happy..
Edwards Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 10:56 PM
Ooo I love running barefoot through lush green fields.. Nice write Nancy luv x0x
Johnson Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 10:11 PM
When everythings fine, and your drunk on the vine. Mother Earth and the Sun have shown your rebirth. Tomorrows the day that you'll know what to say. Because no one will be in your way. Thanks for the honorable mention in your contest.
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