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I sent my wish on fairy wings revealing how my soul did sing, found inspiration in everything; each day and night, those bells would ring. I did not know just what to do; I reached such heights, my spirit flew ~ I shared my best, then I withdrew. Now, here I stand, starting anew… The years have passed, my ink has dried; the words won’t come, my tongue is tied; I want to play but ought to hide. I wonder, should I take this ride? My hope is you will come to see a poet breathes inside of me. I seldom write, but sailed the sea… it's there where I found poetry. 9/13/19 Contest Entry: Welcome to My Random World Sponsored by: Nina Parmenter

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/25/2019 3:03:00 AM

How beautiful. I have a fairy and gazing ball exactly like that in my fairy garden. So glad to find you here, Merry Christmas and thank you for the gift of your poetry. Cheers, SuZ

Hello There
Date: 12/26/2019 6:13:00 PM

Cheers! And thank you, SuZ :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/24/2019 9:07:00 AM

A beautifully expressed poem. Congrats on your top placement.

Hello There
Date: 12/26/2019 6:13:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jeanne!! Not sure how I missed this, but appreciate it nonetheless ;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/20/2019 6:26:00 PM

beautifully penned, poem, especially loved the last two stanza's i think it's safe to say the ink came, heavy... congrats on your win :)

Hello There
Date: 9/20/2019 10:15:00 PM

Ink blot ;) Lol. I shook the pen a bit then revised this some. Thank you so very much, Sandra, for all of your kind words and support.

Chris Green

Date: 9/20/2019 4:08:00 PM

Hey, congrats on your placement in Nina's contest. She's a tough judge so good on you my friend.

Hello There
Date: 9/20/2019 10:08:00 PM

Oh my gosh ~ I didn't know. Thank you for stopping by, Chris, with the good news :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2019 3:47:00 PM

Sailing the sea...finding poetry ...Awesome

Hello There
Date: 9/18/2019 9:54:00 PM

*Smiles ~ thank you so much, Charmaine ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/16/2019 9:39:00 PM

A sweet, light-as-a-feather write, my friend. Should do well in the contest, methinks. :) gw

Hello There
Date: 9/16/2019 10:34:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Gershon :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2019 9:11:00 AM

I agree with Chris. ;0) I expect this will do well in the contest.

Hello There
Date: 9/14/2019 1:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Rick. It means a lot hearing this from each of you <3

Chris Green

Date: 9/13/2019 7:21:00 AM

"the words won't come" ? I think they have and this is fantastic. The flow and rhythm of this piece is smooth and easy to read and the rhymes spot on. I saw this contest last night and started one of my own for a different opening line, but this one did intrigue me as has your poem. This felt light and airy though still holds a bit of tension it seems. You my friend are very talented and should not hold back from writing. That would be our loss if you did. Best wishes in the contest.

Hello There
Date: 9/13/2019 11:05:00 AM

You, my friend, are much too kind. Thank you, though, for your acceptance and encouragement <3