On Everest

I stand on top of world. I’ve won! I’m a statue frozen solid - On tippy-toes I’ve reached the sun. I took a showering from cloud. I’m bitten up with frosty snow. Too late for me to brag out loud. This sunny sphere won’t help unfreeze. On Everest, I’m cold of brain, Too full of pride, to bend my knees. Could artist rush to see me there, and would he chisel me like wax, to find my form - for I am bare. And would a poet shed some tears and make believe that I was brave or struggle with our greatest fears? Who’d music bring to sing of me? Are sirens here at top of world and have they climbed so far from sea? On tippy-toes I’ve reached the sun. There, fire and ice at loggerheads. Deceived of life - it’s death, I won. 8/31/2022
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Buhagiar Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 8:43 AM
Pity a masterpiece of ice. It will melt unless it's high on some glacier.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 12:31 PM
On Everest I don’t think anything melts (shrug)
Tor Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 8:21 PM
Liked Gershon's comment Kim, did you pay him to say that? lol...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 8:59 PM
I paid him in ice cold cash ;)
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 7:18 PM
I just can't resist this moronic comment, so here goes: Hey, Kim, I'm on Everest too. I'm ever resting. ~ Sleepy
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 7:51 PM
LOL!
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