Abdul Rafic Rahman Poet Enclosed Rhyme

On Diet

''Am on diet,Am on diet
I need no more bite,
Am on diet,I may need a flight,
But how long will I be in the sky?
My guest has become my spur,
Deep down is where I found myself,
Without a flit.
Am on diet,Or I can quit,
Shall i forever be on diet?
Will there be my match
When Am on diet
Duration I never showed up
Later I became the new guy
because I was on diet''.

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Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2019 at 9:35 AM Sometimes we are consumed by what we eat. I wonder if what eats us considers us fast food?

Samuel Otieng May 18, 2017 at 3:22 PM Hey Rafic, Nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Darren White February 17, 2017 at 7:52 AM Hey, I love this! I can hear it performed on stage, you do that? Or just hear music while you write?

Patricia Lawton February 17, 2017 at 6:44 AM Hi Rafic , I like this poem, so it's not just me suffering the blooming diet world. ha aah. I agree with Lewis keep them coming. hugs x.

Lewis Raynes February 16, 2017 at 6:27 PM this is such an beat filled poem to read Rafic, welcome to PS, looking forward to more of your poems. :)