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On Diet

''Am on diet,Am on diet I need no more bite, Am on diet,I may need a flight, But how long will I be in the sky? My guest has become my spur, Deep down is where I found myself, Without a flit. Am on diet,Or I can quit, Shall i forever be on diet? Will there be my match When Am on diet Duration I never showed up Later I became the new guy because I was on diet''.

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Date: 9/5/2019 9:35:00 AM
Sometimes we are consumed by what we eat. I wonder if what eats us considers us fast food?
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Date: 5/18/2017 3:22:00 PM
Hey Rafic, Nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/17/2017 7:52:00 AM
Hey, I love this! I can hear it performed on stage, you do that? Or just hear music while you write?
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Date: 2/17/2017 6:44:00 AM
Hi Rafic , I like this poem, so it's not just me suffering the blooming diet world. ha aah. I agree with Lewis keep them coming. hugs x.
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Date: 2/16/2017 6:27:00 PM
this is such an beat filled poem to read Rafic, welcome to PS, looking forward to more of your poems. :)
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