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On Conflict of Faiths Why at all faiths clash, all across, ‘cause faith is a path. Paths do cross. Paths that lead to PEACE. All paths but spell distance and time, But you are yourself Peace Sublime, Feel it. Faiths’ roles cease. 20 APR 12, For: Black eyed Susan’s ‘ Tail Rhyme Time’ Contest Submitted in Jun 12 for Diane Christian's "Faith" contest

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Date: 5/1/2012 7:53:00 AM
'Cause faith is a path. Paths do cross.. Very good, Jag. Goodluck in the contest :)
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Date: 4/29/2012 9:44:00 AM
very nice piece. good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/25/2012 1:58:00 AM
Like this poem, hope B.E.Susaan like it to.Wish you luck in contest hope for a win. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/24/2012 6:29:00 AM
Have you changed this one around a bit? I wish I had them 2 side by side so I could see the modifications...I really do believe that faith helps mold a life of peace...Without my faith, my life would be one huge nervous disaster! ...Hey, you need to get yourself to writing more, young man!...Now get busy.. ha ha. Gwendolen
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:13:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner..Differences in faith have from the beginning of time caused clashes..When Jesus The King returns, it will cease and all will be at peace..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:44:00 PM
Nice analogies you have woven in this tail-rhyme, Jag...strong message and yes, I do feel it! It is all about PEACE!! (sorry, I tho't I had commented on this one yesterday b4 I left for work..) You took a very important theme again and provoked deep tho't! Appreciate this write of yours immensely! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/22/2012 12:47:00 AM
You are yourself peace sublime.. much said in these clever words.. Charma
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Date: 4/21/2012 4:54:00 AM
Excellent entry for the contest enjoyed the write.
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