S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Tail-rhyme

On Conflict of Faiths 1

On Conflict of Faiths

Why at all faiths clash, all across,
‘cause faith is a path. Paths do cross.
Paths that lead to PEACE.

All paths but spell distance and time,
But you  are yourself Peace Sublime,
Feel  it. Faiths’ roles cease.


20 APR 12,
For: Black eyed Susan’s ‘ Tail Rhyme Time’ Contest

Submitted in Jun 12 for Diane Christian's "Faith" contest

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Dinda Minardi May 1, 2012 at 7:53 AM 'Cause faith is a path. Paths do cross.. Very good, Jag. Goodluck in the contest :)

Karen Croft April 29, 2012 at 9:44 AM very nice piece. good luck in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2012 at 1:58 AM Like this poem, hope B.E.Susaan like it to.Wish you luck in contest hope for a win. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Gwendolen Song April 24, 2012 at 6:29 AM Have you changed this one around a bit? I wish I had them 2 side by side so I could see the modifications...I really do believe that faith helps mold a life of peace...Without my faith, my life would be one huge nervous disaster! ...Hey, you need to get yourself to writing more, young man!...Now get busy.. ha ha. Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick April 22, 2012 at 7:13 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner..Differences in faith have from the beginning of time caused clashes..When Jesus The King returns, it will cease and all will be at peace..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Gwendolen Song April 22, 2012 at 2:44 PM Nice analogies you have woven in this tail-rhyme, Jag...strong message and yes, I do feel it! It is all about PEACE!! (sorry, I tho't I had commented on this one yesterday b4 I left for work..) You took a very important theme again and provoked deep tho't! Appreciate this write of yours immensely! :) Gwendolen

Charmaine Chircop April 22, 2012 at 12:47 AM You are yourself peace sublime.. much said in these clever words.. Charma

Anthony Nutter April 21, 2012 at 4:54 AM Excellent entry for the contest enjoyed the write.