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On Comes the Night

Sunset like a cotton candy world full of color fills the sky with mock representations of the earth below. Hills, valleys, rivers and fields in panoramic view float above my head. Clouds disapate and colors deepen as the temptress of sunset takes flight her time now spent. Twilight whispers and seduces as she brings on the blanket of night with bed warm promises till sunrise arrives with it's golden light. Kash wrote a Thau-bauk called Twilight Her Name and through this poem he was my muse for this poem. This is now part of a series of poems including Sunset Reverie, An Evening by The Lake, Days End, A Night of Dreams and Tiny White Canoe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/13/2012 1:24:00 PM
Terry, I think this is very beautiful... :-)) Terry
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/13/2012 8:35:00 PM
Thank you Terry. I think some of my poetry is improving here lately as I have had 2 or three poem that have come out better than I think any I have written before. See you in soup mail. Huggs TLee
Date: 5/8/2012 5:32:00 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Terry. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2012 7:50:00 AM
Hi Carol I think you were one of the first people I met in here when I joined about 4 weeks ago. I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for your kind review. TLee
Date: 5/7/2012 7:16:00 PM
:..and this goes to my Fav poems list.
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:15:00 PM
Excellent imagery here Terry.A beautiful poem.I am honoured.
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 5/7/2012 7:35:00 PM
OH you made me cry. I am so pleased that you like it. It is what you brought to mind with your Hiku and I so hoped that you would like it but I hadn't dared to think that you would like it this much. Thank you friend for being my muse this day. Huggs TLee
Date: 5/7/2012 5:06:00 PM
WOW!!! spectacular imagery and superb rhythm...Wonderful write sweetheart.....
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Date: 5/7/2012 8:25:00 PM
Thanks Elliott I keep striving to get better and hope that I am. I'm so glad that you stopped by I would miss you if you didn't. I hope that life is as happy for you as a sun shinny day. Huggs TLee
Date: 5/7/2012 1:59:00 PM
Terry, great imagery ..David
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:07:00 PM
Thanks David, I have a series of these type of poems I am putting together. I have a fan base of seniors that are in love with this type of poem and want a book of them. I'm working on it. Thanks for stopping by and your kind review. TLee

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