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On Bended Knee

awareness of what she had done liberated tears, one by one memories flooded her musing sorrow struck for what she’d be losing her vision began to blur her words no more than a slur “how did I get to this point”? a moment, she could not appoint where there was hurt, she felt numb her core felt vacant like a drum eyelids curtain, all became dark nothing now but a question mark “will God forgive and welcome me”? I pray He will, on bended knee April 21, 2012 For Paula's CONTEST "...and with a sip"

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Date: 5/4/2012 6:30:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/4/2012 5:43:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "And With a Sip"contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 10:14:00 AM
congrats on your win Diana-Marie...thanks for sharing
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:25:00 AM
Very nice Diana-Marie. Congratulations
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Date: 4/22/2012 8:33:00 PM
Excellent work..
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Date: 4/21/2012 2:46:00 PM
A unique approach to the contest theme Diana-Marie.. Wishing you the best for the contest xoxo
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Date: 4/21/2012 2:40:00 PM
Your poem is sad, but good. I believe that yes God will forgive you. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 4/21/2012 2:04:00 PM
He will forgive and welcome you! Well written, but sad. - Have a lovely weekend in sunshine Diana-Marie. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Diana-Marie Bombardieri
Date: 4/21/2012 2:08:00 PM
thank you Anne Lise:) this one if for Paula's contest "...and with a sip". It is not based on me at all. Have a sunshiny weekend yourself:)
Date: 4/21/2012 1:35:00 PM
very beautiful write
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