Diana-Marie Bombardieri Poet Couplet

On Bended Knee

awareness of what she had done
liberated tears, one by one

memories flooded her musing
sorrow struck for what she’d be losing

her vision began to blur
her words no more than a slur

“how did I get to this point”?
a moment, she could not appoint

where there was hurt, she felt numb
her core felt vacant like a drum

eyelids curtain, all became dark
nothing now but a question mark

“will God forgive and welcome me”?
I pray He will, on bended knee

April 21, 2012
For Paula's CONTEST "...and with a sip"

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Debbie Guzzi May 4, 2012 at 6:30 AM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown May 4, 2012 at 5:43 AM A belated congratulations on your win in the "And With a Sip"contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol

Joseph May April 30, 2012 at 10:14 AM congrats on your win Diana-Marie...thanks for sharing

Bob Quigley April 30, 2012 at 8:25 AM Very nice Diana-Marie. Congratulations

Jerri Ward April 22, 2012 at 8:33 PM Excellent work..

Wilma Neels April 21, 2012 at 2:46 PM A unique approach to the contest theme Diana-Marie.. Wishing you the best for the contest xoxo

Lucilla Carrillo April 21, 2012 at 2:40 PM Your poem is sad, but good. I believe that yes God will forgive you. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2012 at 2:04 PM He will forgive and welcome you! Well written, but sad. - Have a lovely weekend in sunshine Diana-Marie. - oxox love Anne-Lise Diana-Marie Bombardieri April 21, 2012 at 2:08 PM thank you Anne Lise:) this one if for Paula's contest "...and with a sip". It is not based on me at all. Have a sunshiny weekend yourself:)

Karen Croft April 21, 2012 at 1:35 PM very beautiful write