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On becoming Obscene'

Are things becoming obscene..' With the (over-greens?) Starvation an aim ? Sacrifice..' Is it on your name? M I N D the slope.. So Much evidence..' Yet offers?, No Hope..Whats cooking ain't Chook.' And its really, not so good If you'll only take a look..!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2024 10:17:00 PM

What is chook? Enquiring minds want to know!

Joe Maverick
Date: 7/20/2024 12:51:00 AM

Chook is a colloquilisam for Chicken dear Andrea..Derived No doubt from its clucking And the fact if you want to eat One it needs plucking..and it the pot chucking!! We are Quite inventive us Aussies you Know? When filtering the old Lingos' Now you have caused me to remember G W..??? He's a good sport though..And keeps A 'low profile' i often wonder why thats so??

Paige Hind

Date: 7/19/2024 1:23:00 PM

A write that makes you think- enjoyed it

Joe Maverick
Date: 7/20/2024 12:46:00 AM

Wow..I didnt know I was that Forceful Paige.?? I'd better watch Out..Or I'll be labelled a dictator Or a something or other lol)) however i shall offer you unforced thanks to to?? Rectify the matter! All blessings!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/16/2024 11:14:00 AM

Very, very creative poem, Joe. Questions to ponder. There is such a unique quality to your writing - a style that is all your own, fresh and original. Thank you or this poem. Blessings!

Joe Maverick
Date: 7/16/2024 3:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Sam may Your blessings abound.'