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On becoming Obscene'

Are things becoming obscene..'
With the (over-greens?)
Starvation an aim ?
Sacrifice..' Is it on your name?
M I N D the slope.. So
Much evidence..' Yet offers?, No
Hope..Whats cooking ain't
Chook.' And its really, not so good 
If you'll only take a look..!

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Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2024 at 10:17 PM

What is chook? Enquiring minds want to know!

Joe Maverick

July 20, 2024 at 12:51 AM

Chook is a colloquilisam for Chicken dear Andrea..Derived No doubt from its clucking And the fact if you want to eat One it needs plucking..and it the pot chucking!! We are Quite inventive us Aussies you Know? When filtering the old Lingos' Now you have caused me to remember G W..??? He's a good sport though..And keeps A 'low profile' i often wonder why thats so??

Paige Hind

July 19, 2024 at 1:23 PM

A write that makes you think- enjoyed it

Joe Maverick

July 20, 2024 at 12:46 AM

Wow..I didnt know I was that Forceful Paige.?? I'd better watch Out..Or I'll be labelled a dictator Or a something or other lol)) however i shall offer you unforced thanks to to?? Rectify the matter! All blessings!

Sam Kauffman

July 16, 2024 at 11:14 AM

Very, very creative poem, Joe. Questions to ponder. There is such a unique quality to your writing - a style that is all your own, fresh and original. Thank you or this poem. Blessings!

Joe Maverick

July 16, 2024 at 3:35 PM

Thank you so much Sam may Your blessings abound.'

On becoming Obscene'

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