On Ashen Sands and Violet Skies

On Ashen Sands And Violet Skies

Hues of ashen sands meet violet skies,
An azure horizon in their midst lies,
Bound in natures quiet spell,
Drinking in the divine beauty as well,
Transfixed I sit by my window sill,
Captured in the web of quiet thrill,
As I serenely sit by,
Venus dips lower in the sky,
As the hues subside I see it glow,
It’s Orion both of us know,
Then in the tranquil sky I sense a stir,
As I spot a new glimmer in her,
As it becomes clearer to the eyes,
I wonder if it’s a drone sent by spies,
It shines its unique light on me,
Trying to say something I see,
As it now rises and grows dimmer,
I hear mother call for dinner,
It’s mystery still lies in my heart,
As I try to express it in my art....

04/02/2020
I will never forget.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/17/2020 8:41:00 AM
I can so relate with this muse with familiar moments beneath the stars. Beautifully penned. Congratulations Rashi :)
Login to Reply
Soni Avatar
Rashi Soni
Date: 5/17/2020 10:23:00 AM
Thank you so much. Stars for me are like a friend at all times. They are the ones who comfort me all the time. Thank you for you delightful comment. Rashi
Date: 5/17/2020 7:51:00 AM
Seems like a mysterious experience, that will have no explanation but live with you forever.. Great poetic story telling.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Login to Reply
Soni Avatar
Rashi Soni
Date: 5/17/2020 10:21:00 AM
Thank you so much. What helps me write is but the inspiration I receive from your poems. Thanks again. Rashi
Date: 4/2/2020 1:41:00 PM
It’s mystery still lies in my heart, As I try to express it in my art.... These are elegant lines, my friend. The sentiment of all poets. Nicely inked. Good luck in the contest. JC Hawkens
Login to Reply
Soni Avatar
Rashi Soni
Date: 4/3/2020 3:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for your support. I am often captivated by the sky and the stars. So I thought that it would be a good idea to write on my favourite topic. Thanks again for the wishes. Rashi
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad