On and On

Time ticks on and on
My sad soul is melting ice
That melts in your hand

Rain reigns upon me
Forest is the precious green
Hope will set me free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:12 PM
A beautiful set of haikus JW. Your first haiku really touched me; the first line sets it up nicely then the middle and last lines finish it fantastically. Your second haiku has beautiful imagery and is lovely. Well done! :)
Breidenthal Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 10:06 PM
Thank you so much. Please make sure to check out my other poems. I have more coming their way. Thank you once again for your heartfelt supoort. -JWE
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