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On and On

Time ticks on and on My sad soul is melting ice That melts in your hand Rain reigns upon me Forest is the precious green Hope will set me free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/24/2017 8:12:00 PM
A beautiful set of haikus JW. Your first haiku really touched me; the first line sets it up nicely then the middle and last lines finish it fantastically. Your second haiku has beautiful imagery and is lovely. Well done! :)
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 9/28/2017 10:06:00 PM
Thank you so much. Please make sure to check out my other poems. I have more coming their way. Thank you once again for your heartfelt supoort. -JWE

Book: Shattered Sighs