On a Windy Autumn Day

On a autumn windy day
The dressed oak now almost bare
The raining leaves cover the ground
Once twisted branches now unbound 

A sparrow sits so brave
On a branch she rides the waves
Back and forth her feathers sway
On a windy autumn day
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Krutsinger Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 11:27 PM
Oh, your imagery is terrific in this one, my friend. Well done! Keep them coming.
Addino Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 8:59 PM
Thanks
Laurie Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 5:38 PM
G'day Victoria … easy to picture the scene you gave me with your words - thank you Victoria - Lindsay
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December 10, 2018 at 8:59 PM
Thanks
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