On a Hamsters Wheel

can faith truly heal
          redemption hypnotic zeal 
            never mind feels real 
  
Faith Healer Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann 
 07/12/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Neumann Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 3:34 AM
Short, poignant and succinct. Congratulations and kind wishes, Kai
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 6:32 AM
Delighted Kai with your placement, thank you so much, great contest, cheers David
Flaherty Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 12:22 PM
Hamster Wheel Faith Placebo
Flaherty Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 12:58 PM
I do so David my mate and your poem expressed the feeling perfectly. Borrow away my friend
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 12:49 PM
You feel it too Christopher, but the hamster knows when to give up, or maybe just tires, I like that line faith placebo, might borrow that, cheers David
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