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On a Hamsters Wheel

can faith truly heal redemption hypnotic zeal never mind feels real Faith Healer Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann 07/12/2020

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/31/2020 3:34:00 AM

Short, poignant and succinct. Congratulations and kind wishes, Kai

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/31/2020 6:32:00 AM

Delighted Kai with your placement, thank you so much, great contest, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 12/7/2020 12:22:00 PM

Hamster Wheel Faith Placebo

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 12/7/2020 12:58:00 PM

I do so David my mate and your poem expressed the feeling perfectly. Borrow away my friend

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/7/2020 12:49:00 PM

You feel it too Christopher, but the hamster knows when to give up, or maybe just tires, I like that line faith placebo, might borrow that, cheers David