Home » Poems » Mystic Rose Rose » On A Cold Wintry Day

On A Cold Wintry Day

On a cold wintry day of December a praying owl with jewel eyes of ember helps the stars in heaven dismember, as the moon prays to remember.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/2/2024 2:29:00 AM

A small jewel to be remembered. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/31/2024 3:56:00 PM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, a beautiful poem. I enjoyed to read. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/2/2024 10:15:00 AM

Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, Yes i enjoyed this poem. Hugs. Darlene/

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/31/2024 4:32:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the poem dear Darlene

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2024 9:48:00 AM

Dear Rose, your golden pen spills a mystical night scene, both earthly and ethereal. I adore your imagery "a praying owl with jewel eyes of ember" who helps the stars and moon to realign and remember. I enjoyed the sensory imagery of "cold wintry day" juxtaposed with "eyes of ember" - subtle yet very effective! Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/31/2024 4:32:00 PM

Thankyou for stopping by my poetry Susan, have a blessed evening :)