On A Cold Wintry Day






On a cold wintry day of December a praying owl with jewel eyes of ember helps the stars in heaven dismember, as the moon prays to remember.
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Buhagiar Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 2:29 AM
A small jewel to be remembered. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 3:56 PM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, a beautiful poem. I enjoyed to read. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 10:15 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, Yes i enjoyed this poem. Hugs. Darlene/
Rose  Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem dear Darlene
Ashley Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 9:48 AM
Dear Rose, your golden pen spills a mystical night scene, both earthly and ethereal. I adore your imagery "a praying owl with jewel eyes of ember" who helps the stars and moon to realign and remember. I enjoyed the sensory imagery of "cold wintry day" juxtaposed with "eyes of ember" - subtle yet very effective! Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Rose  Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 4:32 PM
Thankyou for stopping by my poetry Susan, have a blessed evening :)
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