On a Cold Winter Night

On a fantastic cloudless winter night I look at the stars, they’re all so bright Feeling the zephyr in this pacific place Viewing the trees as they swing with grace. Colder are the days, masses sick and sneezing As day by day the weather is so freezing. It is the prettiest time of the winter Winter is here with magic below O Number. Feel the sensational tresses like curls of snow And the passionate eyes like embers aglow With pale face pointing to that desire To be surrounded by subtle white fire. A weary mind at last permitted to rest musing on the fruition of how I’m blessed.
+++ December 20, 2014 Form: Rhyme
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Deschler Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Winter is one of the most beautiful seasons, even with it's below zero temperatures and the illness that always follows... Congratulations on winning with this lovely poem! Nicely done, Dr. Ram!
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Absolutely beautiful, dear friend!... Congrats on a great win!!... Hugs.. Arlene
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 2:09 PM
You painted a lovely picture Dr Mehta many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 1:28 PM
congratulations Dr M. another fine winning poem for sure
Haight Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram, for your lovey poetic image of Winter. Sandra
Kayode Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 10:27 PM
Congrats on the win Dr....huggs
May Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 9:42 PM
Congrats on a great win Dr Ram
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January 17, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Lindley Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:45 AM
"A weary mind at last permitted to rest musing on the fruition of how I’m blessed." A very fitting ending to a wonderful write! Super 7 on this gem!!
Mcdaid Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 12:52 PM
beautifully painted piece ram wishing you and your family a happy christmas
Smith Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Stunning picture of winter.. Iove, "subtle white fire!"... Something so delicate and white could actually burn one.. Good luck in the contest, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Goswami Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Beautiful sir. I enjoyed it...Thank you very much. Best wishes to you.
Richards Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 10:14 AM
This lovely poem makes me want to stand out in the cold winter night and savor the magic of the season. So beautiful !! Have a beautiful and blessed holiday, Dr. Ram !! And thank you for your many kind comments this year...I am grateful !
Kayode Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 9:28 AM
Merry Christmas Dr,truly a winter weather...huggs
Smith Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 6:37 AM
You painted a marvelous picture....Tim
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