Sharon Well Poet Tail-rhyme

On a Cloudy Night

drums roll from the distant greyness,
plunges the grey house in darkness, 
dark as night.

Angels looking down with softness, 
their hearts soft and kind with whiteness,
milky white. 

Contest: Tail-rhyme
Date: 08/02/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 8, 2011 at 4:41 PM Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Sharon. Love, Carol

Kash Poet August 7, 2011 at 10:22 AM Very nice Sharon...congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 6, 2011 at 1:05 AM Congrats Sharon on your HM in the contest with this fantastic entry ..enjoy special honor with luv..

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2011 at 9:29 PM good contrasting imagery going on in this one. Congrats in the contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 5, 2011 at 5:18 PM Congratulations on the win in my contest, Sharon

Sara Kendrick August 2, 2011 at 8:48 PM Good one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good luck in the contest...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 2, 2011 at 6:07 PM elegant soft words Sharon ..good luck in the contest luv.. those Angels make this one beautiful.. and oh I collect them..have at least 3000 inside and outside my home right now..oh..

Dr.Ram Mehta August 2, 2011 at 5:49 PM Thanks for the entry, Sharon