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On a Cloudy Night

drums roll from the distant greyness, plunges the grey house in darkness, dark as night. Angels looking down with softness, their hearts soft and kind with whiteness, milky white. Contest: Tail-rhyme Date: 08/02/11

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Date: 8/8/2011 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2011 10:22:00 AM
Very nice Sharon...congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/6/2011 1:05:00 AM
Congrats Sharon on your HM in the contest with this fantastic entry ..enjoy special honor with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2011 9:29:00 PM
good contrasting imagery going on in this one. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 8/5/2011 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, Sharon
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:48:00 PM
Good one..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good luck in the contest...Sara
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:07:00 PM
elegant soft words Sharon ..good luck in the contest luv.. those Angels make this one beautiful.. and oh I collect them..have at least 3000 inside and outside my home right now..oh..
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Date: 8/2/2011 5:49:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Sharon
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