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On a Bike

Among the many things that sit Forgotten in our shed, My son’s old bicycle called out, Just messing with my head. I finally decided that The time had come to see If it could be restored enough To get some use from me. I dusted off the cobwebs, Scrubbed the frame but after that, I noticed that the tires were Unfortunately flat. We tossed the bike into the car And drove to get some air. Back home, I hopped on for a ride Not thinking, do I dare? With just one gear I pedaled on; It made a clunky noise And even though I fell (just once!) It brought back childhood joys. I doubt I’ll ride it very much But when I can, I will, As long as I don’t leave my street And have to face a hill!

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Date: 8/7/2022 10:48:00 PM
I had a horrible bike wreck on Feb 5, 1984. I will never get on a bike again, for I broke my leg in 5 places and tore off half my face. I am glad it has good memories for you though.
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Date: 8/2/2022 12:09:00 PM
ilene, you bring me memories of riding my bike I restored when I was young. I became a long-distance cyclist. Thank you. Tom Carter
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Date: 8/1/2022 10:52:00 AM
Sounds like me in my early bike riding years. It took the longest time for me to learn how to stop my Monarch by using the brakes. Usually, I'd just let it slow down until it...and I...fell over. An exercise bike...occasionally...is as close as I get to one of those critters these days. I love your "homey" vignettes, Ilene.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 8/1/2022 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Jim! If I had hand brakes, I would have been a bit more comfortable and maybe wouldn’t have fallen. Still felt a sense of accomplishment!
Date: 7/31/2022 8:22:00 PM
Sounds like a JC Higgins. Is it?!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 8/1/2022 11:43:00 AM
Never heard of that. It’s a Huffy boy’s bike more than 30 years old. Don’t think they make them so heavy nowadays…
Date: 7/31/2022 6:48:00 PM
Oh, I hesitate to think about it, Ilene. I used to be an expert on a bike, as a kid, but I haven't tried on in years and years. I'm afraid I'd fall and break a leg or something. I am so happy that you enjoyed your return to childhood days!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 8/1/2022 11:44:00 AM
I don’t expect to do any long-distance riding, Milton. My one little fall yesterday put a damper in my confidence…
Date: 7/31/2022 6:31:00 PM
Now this is POTD quality! Aloha!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 8/1/2022 11:46:00 AM
Thank you, Rico! My husband got a good laugh when I fell (once he knew I wasn’t hurt) but I got right back in the saddle again, although at a slightly slower pace…

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