Oman

I'll wrap around the silk of each day
until I will become core
to your time

I gather you up speck by speck
rumor
flutter
tear
I wait a becoming
bitter song
amidst the lips of the night

When the roads' arms 
will embrace me
ripping my body
I'll sprout, shadowing the future
with your sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 10, 2020 at 3:25 AM
This is really awesome. Your very talented. Not sure how I missed you all these years. Than again I'm not very perceptive lol
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February 7, 2016 at 10:42 AM
Camelia Radu, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 12, 2016 at 2:36 PM
Epic and deep write... awesome to read today. SKAT
Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 12:01 PM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Camelia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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March 6, 2013 at 11:15 PM
Thank you, Carol, your words impresses me .. I hope ... to be at the height of your beautiful wishes..
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July 26, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Thanks, Carol, for your warm and friendly comment. As for inspiration, honestly, I would like very much to be as original as my life is. I also hope to make my friends of the poets of this site.
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July 23, 2012 at 4:42 PM
nice write Camelia,welcome
Radu Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 6:47 PM
Thanks, Richard, nice your words too...
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July 23, 2012 at 4:39 AM
Dear Vichy, thank you!!! Your words touch me so.. .. thanks
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July 23, 2012 at 3:04 AM
Hey Camelia - lovely imagery you've used here. Commendable determination brought out in the poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup
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July 23, 2012 at 5:08 AM
Thanks, Vicky, for the kind words!:)
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