Olden Ocean

White curl'd hairs of spumes
reveals its longevity-
Blue Ocean of Old
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Golden Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Lovely piece which fills the senses with the picture you paint. Well done, Ismael, and thanks for your comments!
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September 18, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. The title compliments the poem. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comments. Have a good weekend! Karen
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 3:12 AM
Love the Haiku. It is so descriptive that I can see the place. Keep writing. Sara
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September 18, 2009 at 12:44 AM
Beautiful imagery, going to my fav's
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