OldDeR

 Now that l am alot older,
Have l though really evouled
 looking back over my shoulder
So many issues still unresolved

Used to think l was a puzzle solver
If l could only get a grip take hold
Perhaps now alot more bolder?
But still stuck l am in this mould

Then not really much of an evolver
If the the truth be known, be told
As l feel like this wouded soldier
A mystery still left unsolved?


Another little introspection aspects of me written early 2020
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Daniel Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 9:31 PM
You write well, David, if you could avoid the spelling mistakes, it would be great:)
Scott Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 10:23 PM
Sorry typing bit to fast
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