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Old Tom Cat Smut

Smut old tom cat Blind as a bat incontinent as a baby Casanova, maybe? Gentle smooth lover Naps over and over!

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 9/25/2010 7:16:00 AM

LOL loved your puddy cat write Doris .. had me smiling .. thanks for the comment on my poem much appreciated love Jayne

Sean Kelly

Date: 9/23/2010 8:14:00 AM

Yeah ! , it's a tough life , being a tom-cat , Doris . No , I don't think "hollow" is too wordy . It captures that sense of lonliness so well . I should be very surprised if it is not high on the list . Write onnnnnnnn , Doris . PS Meeeeeoooowwww !!! .... Now , back to sleep .......

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2010 5:29:00 PM

oh, this is so cute. HAd it been for the cat contest. I really like it, Doris. LUv, Andrea

Cecil Hickman

Date: 9/5/2010 9:13:00 PM

you have penned a witty and truthful piece of poetry about old toms,,,,,Blessings..Cecil

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/4/2010 8:08:00 PM

Super cool write Doris... luv your thoughts here and touch of humor..too.. appreciate your sweet comments on my contest entry..luv.. its all about faith in the end...luv.. happy safe weekend for the holiday..

John Freeman

Date: 9/4/2010 7:54:00 PM

Yep! Thats what old Toms do. Yep, edgy! Lol. AGAPE, MOSES

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/3/2010 10:04:00 PM

We still live in hope the casanova part will reveal itself hehe Enjoy this write Doris, enjoy the weekend ahead ~ Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2010 9:00:00 PM

oi! Doris, sounds like my x- lol, but he was no Tom cat,, more like Jerry louse,, but , really lazy,, with all the words above. he he he even the Casanova, role,, he thought he was one.. enjoyed your poem, really your cat sounds fun,,lol,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/3/2010 6:47:00 PM

A nice pen picture of a baby Casanova, Doris

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2010 2:07:00 PM

He's still got the b_well you know..We just might see l5 or 20 little Smuts running around next Spring...Thanks for stopping by and commmenting on my work..Mom

Nigel Fox

Date: 9/3/2010 1:48:00 PM

Doris this is lovely I love cats , our Jerry is a young Tom all so full of it !