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by Michael J Falotico I reach out to hug.. only air is what I touch.. so I kiss the sky.. embracing lost love.. my hands met with only cold.. just a breeze and me.. lingering hope spills.. an old picture put away.. frame now new again.. new buds have formed.. all the colors lick the sun.. today we stand tall..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2011 11:36:00 AM

wow! and i love the last one .. so so much... new taste buds... i imagine you mean a new flavor of a person... i say give me a couple of days.. and i'll be posting good again... take care,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/14/2011 9:12:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Michael. I enjoyed reading it and hope you find even more inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a great day. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/14/2011 6:59:00 AM

This is a real beauty Michael and an awesome message behind it as well, love Wilma

Jack Horne

Date: 4/14/2011 6:44:00 AM

lovely imagery, Michael

Emma Mantle

Date: 4/14/2011 6:12:00 AM

A great Haiku Michael. Love the 3rd stanza. Well expressed, best wishes Em :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2011 10:18:00 PM

I like the transformation from old to new here. Great haiku series. So it is not for a contest? It sure looks good enough for one!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/13/2011 8:38:00 PM

Delightful as always my White Knight and luv the form of presentation.. very interesting design to entice the reader luv.. words of expression fill the eyes and mind with imagery so fantastic luv.. u also have S.M. and your Jersey Girl is in judging mode with "BABY BABBLES".. forever and always with luv.. don't work too hard ...

Lala Robinson

Date: 4/13/2011 7:51:00 PM

nicee :)

Genesis Sanchez

Date: 4/13/2011 7:41:00 PM

enjoyed, it relates to my poems.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2011 3:42:00 PM

Enjoyed this descriptive and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by with the uplifting comments..I especially like the last Haiku..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2011 3:11:00 PM

When one love leaves our lives, we are sometimes blessed to find "new buds have formed." Now you have someone standing beside you again and I hope you both "kiss the sky" in gratitude. It's wonderful to have a second chance at love, Michael. So happy for you! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/13/2011 3:10:00 PM

michael dear, how sad but beautiful in poetic flow and sentiment... i enjoyed this smorgasbord of haiku which touches my soul and sings of hope in the end... if for a contest, a winning delight! breathless.. :) huggs, nette