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Old Salt Prayer

I’ve seen the seaman’s life around, So, when I step on solid ground, Where I’ve forgot how life self goes, Who rules this world and how grass grows, I have a feeling of distortion Of everything to smallest portion, And breeze that blows humans’ faces Out to the ugliest grimaces Again remind me days and nights That being spent away from lights, The cities’ smogs and women’s laces, Were fulfilled with the Ocean races, Night watches, squalls, and pitch, and roll – To name a few to d*mn’em all! The sunsets miles away from home And countries hardly ever known To those wasting lives ashore, The highest tides and cheapest whores, The destined ups-n-downs after I only heard the Fortune’s laughter, When everything that I could make, Was my face’s smiling poor fake! I do remember ships-n-captains, The seamen’s dreams of life like sultan’s, Drake’s Passage monster waves and waters, Chinese typhoons and bloodshed slaughters, The taste of salt upon my lips, The Lord God’s mercy giving tips, Sea spirit, zest and playful mood That raise up right in neighborhood, Yet frequent kicks and rare smiles, Else shipborne deaths, officials’ files, And - to complete this shortest list – Dead leeward leak and starboard mist!

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Date: 11/6/2013 12:22:00 AM
Hi S L, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/3/2013 1:39:00 PM
Hello,Slobodan your poem is missing.. By the looks of the title I know it's gonna be interesting... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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