Old Rusty Gate

All that's left of my childhood home, is this old rusty gate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 1:30 PM
A short write, but it evokes poignant images....a derelict house that eventually collapsed, burying so many childhood memories. A wish to open that gate and once more walk into the past.... Regards // paul
Yvonne Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Excellent take on this challenge.
Salehi Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 1:42 AM
I know the feeling...
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 3:47 PM
A sad and nostalgic one. I like it, Alexis.
Onclaud Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 1:52 PM
that must be a mighty antique gate, alexis.... nice job!..huggs
Green Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 12:32 PM
A little sad but I am more than certain that rusty old gate held many memories within it's still standing shape. This was quite lovely Alexis. I could picture this.
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