8 October 2025, for 'MAKE IT TWO, PLEASE' Poetry Contest; Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
River flows, to and fro, in rhyme, With pebble murmurs keeping time. Stone edges knocked and bumped smooth, by restless, rock-roll dancing, on time-scarred and weathered floors, with karaoke.
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