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Verse form -  Date: 07-10-2025

Old Pebbles

Nature's flamboyant tiny gifts

Brought to beaches by the gushed drifts

People cherish old pebbles

As the soft touch enthral them

They treat them as prized assets

And fortune bringers


Placed: 2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Nice one , Patri. Congratulations
Venkata Ramana Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 10:49 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
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