Old Married Couple

While viewing a painting I liked by Paul Klee,
A docent-in-training came over to me.
Can I ask you some questions, if you wouldn’t mind,
About “Old Married Couple,” as she’d been assigned.

I told her the woman appeared to berate
Her husband, who seemed to accept this as fate.
His eyes, closed or downcast, displayed on his face 
Resignation, as if he’d accepted his place.

The trainee, amused, didn’t say I was wrong
But her script sang a very much different-type song.
The husband was sleeping, the wife, sitting near,
Gazed with tenderness - how it was meant to appear.

I called to my husband to see what he thought
And he gave me the answer that I would have sought.
He agreed with my take, all the proof that we’d need
That we sure are an “old married couple” indeed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Volumes Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 8:23 PM
Yup can relate. Wonderful poem Ilene.
Watt Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 10:32 PM
Art, like poetry, can sometimes take the mind in more than one direction. I love how you and your husband both had the same take on the meaning. A delightful anecdote, and a great little piece on art and psychology.
Turner Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Had they painted with words, there would have been no argument. LOl It takes a while to get us trained but once trained, it's yes dear, no dear. Thanks for the chuckle, Ilene.
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 1:29 PM
haha, I do not know the picture. But your interpretation makes the most sense!
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