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Old Married Couple

While viewing a painting I liked by Paul Klee, A docent-in-training came over to me. Can I ask you some questions, if you wouldn’t mind, About “Old Married Couple,” as she’d been assigned. I told her the woman appeared to berate Her husband, who seemed to accept this as fate. His eyes, closed or downcast, displayed on his face Resignation, as if he’d accepted his place. The trainee, amused, didn’t say I was wrong But her script sang a very much different-type song. The husband was sleeping, the wife, sitting near, Gazed with tenderness - how it was meant to appear. I called to my husband to see what he thought And he gave me the answer that I would have sought. He agreed with my take, all the proof that we’d need That we sure are an “old married couple” indeed.

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Date: 3/28/2023 8:23:00 PM
Yup can relate. Wonderful poem Ilene.
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Date: 3/27/2023 10:32:00 PM
Art, like poetry, can sometimes take the mind in more than one direction. I love how you and your husband both had the same take on the meaning. A delightful anecdote, and a great little piece on art and psychology.
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Date: 3/27/2023 2:54:00 PM
Had they painted with words, there would have been no argument. LOl It takes a while to get us trained but once trained, it's yes dear, no dear. Thanks for the chuckle, Ilene.
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Date: 3/27/2023 1:29:00 PM
haha, I do not know the picture. But your interpretation makes the most sense!
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