Old Man , Young Wife

OLD  MAN,     YOUNG   WIFE


The mournful mist snaked thru the park      
Cold and Grey and looking cheerless,                
Soft, like a lie told in the dark.           
Quiet, still and seeming harmless,        
Twisting smugly, even careless.                         
Obscuring all the paths, the lake,   
And hiding direction to take.        
It hid the truth, it hid the view:              
An invitation to mistake  -              
Distorting everything I knew.     


Your scornful lies snaked thru my life  -
Yes, old and grey, but still fearless
And willing to take you for wife.
Your youth and beauty were peerless
And I thought your love was ageless.
You said he’s just a one-time friend                                                                    
Your affair had long reached its end.      
Words designed to mislead, confuse,         
Twist and hide: the truth to bend  -                                                                  
Your entire love was just a ruse.  

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Entered  in  Dr.  Ram  Mehta's  Contest   "Dizain"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 2:39 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Dizain" contest Syd. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Sydney, A sad twist in one's life, whoever, but these things do happen. Congratulations on your honored poem entry. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in my contest, sydney
Devonshire Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 5:28 PM
Oh, Dr. Ram s going to love this one, Syd. I actually hate to see women take advantage of men this way and your poem explains why so powerfully. That last line actually gave me chills. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn
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