Old Man Mountain

Old man mountain, face,
flowing white mane, unending
ever evolving.


Insprired by Raul Moreno's contest
thanks for the challenge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 10:23 AM
I like the description in this one Doris.....:JP]
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 2:46 AM
Good Haiku. Constant change that can't be stopped. Keep writing. Mom
Golden Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 10:19 PM
Great haiku, Doris! You've brought the mountain to life in a brand new way! Hugs, Donna
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October 7, 2009 at 6:38 PM
Hey Doris, Would you believe I saw that same face. I was sitting about 5 ft from my PC and I said hey that looks like an old man with a beard.Weird Huh? lol I enjoyed your Haiku...Marty
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