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Old Man

The old man in me remembers all the years now gone, but that young man I used to be is not ready to move on. My mind still tells me,"Yes. You can", while my body tells me,"No". My body tells me, "Rest a while", but my mind still tells me, "Go". Then you gently touch my hand and ask if I'm O.K. and I know without a doubt how blessed I am today. Sometimes my mind does wander to the me I used to be, but I would not change one single thing that brought your love to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/17/2016 12:34:00 PM
Another seven for me, Lary. I love it!
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Date: 10/16/2016 3:10:00 PM
Hello Dave, nice to meet you,I found myself being lost in your poem. I enjoyed it, Larry.Yes who love did you refer to. Nice poem.
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Date: 10/16/2016 3:04:00 PM
Whose love you refer to is immaterial, it is a lovely write. Lary. God Bless. D.
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