Old Man

Is the night as long as your coat or as short 
as your footsteps. Old man shuffling past,
are you proof that dreams don't last.
Living in the shade where shadows can't cast.

Tell me was I there

Making journey's do you ever get there, did
you have a love, did anyone care. Oblivious
to all that stand and stare.

Was it always so

Has each stain a story to tell, every cup of 
tea a memory to sell. Every paving stone a 
passage to hell.

Loneliness will always be

Old man shuffling by, winds chill and
clocks cry. Twist of fate and there go I,
our shadows the one true friend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 3:53 AM
Hi Daniel, I guess you know by now that I am really enjoying your work. Each piece "grabs" the heart and won't let go. Loneliness- Excellent. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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February 9, 2010 at 4:19 PM
Wow! The emotion comes through your words in this one. Sad reality for far too many. Gripping story. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
Culverhouse Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 1:27 PM
sadly written, you must be nostalgic
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