Paul Beadnall Poet Rhyme

Old Jack

Having collaborated, o with just a few
   Poetry Soup members,i`ll always give them due
     for their kind comments and others even more
       one person inparticular, Old Jack, he hits the core.

          He is funny without realising,he does so make me giggle
            the picture i have of him,a tyre round his middle
               over six feet tall,with ginger hair,like a true Jock
                 stubbon as hell, very proud, and sometimes likes to mock.

                     His poems very frequently, touch on all that`s kind
                       his politeness and charm,sure that`s why the ladies find
                         a caring correspondant,or maybe a walk in the park
                           my opinion on this gent, is way above the dark.

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Cory Long July 25, 2011 at 1:00 PM this is awesome.. cory Paul Beadnall July 25, 2011 at 1:45 PM Thanks very much,Cory. I really enjoyed pulling this one out from no where .. Blessings.. Paul

Kevin Clark July 22, 2011 at 8:10 AM Nice tribute to your friend Paul Beadnall July 22, 2011 at 9:12 AM Cheers mate, i enjoyed writing it ;) Blessings.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 22, 2011 at 7:20 AM Happy weekend and thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us once again Paul. I am going to try and write some entries for the contests this weekend also. It is still so hot and humid here but we might get some relief next week. Wishing you a weekend filled with joy and inspiration. Love, Carol Paul Beadnall July 22, 2011 at 7:35 AM Thank you Carol. Hoping the same for you. I see there is a heatwave in the States, i think i`d swap for this English weather, 2 days sun 3 weeks rain , and this peak summer. Have yourself a calming inspirational weekend too. Blessings Paul

Carole Cookie Arnold July 22, 2011 at 4:53 AM Interesting format Paul I like it. A wonderful tribute about jack It is nice to see praise for one another something that many do not know how to do. Yet here on soup I have found everyone supportive and loving. Bravo Carole Cookie Arnold Paul Beadnall July 22, 2011 at 5:27 AM Thank yo very much,Carole. I have only been on soup for a short while, i too am always loving and supportive, but in Jack i seem to have found a bonded friendship.. blessings Paul

Nette Onclaud July 22, 2011 at 12:34 AM oh, what a generous, affection dedication for kack, paul... realy nive!.. come visit! :) huggs, nette Paul Beadnall July 22, 2011 at 1:07 AM Thanks Nette, Jack and myself self have struck up a nice little repatoir and friendship bond over these past few days, all good , why not blessings Paul x You say come visit ?? Paul Beadnall July 22, 2011 at 1:07 AM Thanks Nette, Jack and myself self have struck up a nice little repatoir and friendship bond over these past few days, all good , why not blessings Paul x You say come visit ??

Jack Ross Jr. July 21, 2011 at 4:00 PM LOL, only five nine and three quarters now, still some ginger in my hair, tummy flat, about 180, you've got me mate, giggles...You are the best mate, can't tell you how much of every emotion you bring me. Great to have a terrific friend like you. God bless you my fine English Gent...hats off.....Jack Paul Beadnall July 21, 2011 at 6:03 PM Ok , not bad,though. You`ve shrunk,lost some weight and going grey ahahhah ;) Glad to bring a grin to your face, dosn`t cost nothing,mate. Off to bed now.. blessing Atlantic wanderer from Fife ;)