Notes About The Poem

This poems title is partly taken from an old Tom T. Hall song entitled "OLD DOGS, CHILDREN, AND WATERMELON WINE". I first heard it years ago and it still echoes throughout my life. 

Old Dogs and Children

Old Dogs and Children**

Woke up
always a plus.
Took care of business.
Found my teeth -
a must.
Brushed them…..off.
Made coffee
meditated on its scent
and promise.
Met the dog at the door
(no explanation necessary)
Made breakfast for two.
Exchanged greetings
grumps, grunts and
hugs with wife,
confidante and lover
(all at the same time)
Thought about-
-cutting the grass
-washing the truck
-bathing the dog
-planting some flowers
-colonizing the moon
Woke up - refreshed
Didn’t do any of the above.
Visited five month old granddaughter
-changed diapers
-pushed carriage
-sang songs
-Grandma fed her
-changed diapers
-played on floor(with baby)
-stayed on floor(to recover)
Returned home
Made coffee
meditated on its scent
and promise.
Met the dog – again.
Shared a quiet(?) supper.
Exchanged good nights
grumps, grunts and
hugs with wife,
confidante and lover.


John G. Lawless
5/15/2015

**with apologies to Tom T. Hall
Song title “Old Dogs, Children and Watermelon Wine


submitted to – Today I Accomplished – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Sara Kendrick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 1:26 PM
Such a great list poem, John. Wonderful take on the subject, and congratulations on your fine win! Sandra
Lawless Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 5:57 PM
A apologetic - better late than never---thank you ....this slipped off the radar
A   Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 3:38 PM
John:) Congratulations, on your sweet win. Love LINDA
Lawless Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 5:56 PM
A very belated thank you...
Lindley Avatar
May 23, 2015 at 10:17 AM
This one struck me. It shows that life is a joy , a complexity and an acceptance of the mundane as part of how we can see the exceptional and blessed gifts life offers. A7 and a very fine one to read this morn my friend..
Lawless Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 6:48 AM
Thanks Robert, I often find a beauty in the trivial, the mundane, the day to day monotony of life and find it our job to raise it to meaningfulness. Appreciate your support and high marks.
Kendrick Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 8:37 AM
Got a chuckle in this unique winner..I enjoyed reading your entry in my contest..Congrats..Sara
Lawless Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Sara thanks for your time and energy in sponsoring the contest. I like to let the muse color outside the lines....occasionally the little bugger runs right off the page....
Merryman Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Great list poem, John! Your first line reminds me of what my grandfather would say when I called him. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Lawless Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thanks Kim for your comment and support
A  Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 6:46 PM
John, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
Lawless Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thank you again SKAT for your continued support
Roper Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations on your win, to a very busy day.Granddaughters always come first Hugs eve
Lawless Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Yeah, Eve, I often wonder what happened to all the "free time" I'd have when I got older....hahahahaha
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 12:19 PM
made me smile - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Thank you Jan. It is good to make poets smile....
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