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Old Bear

Old Bear As the New Year dawns The Old Bear yawns In his old gruff growl That almost sounds like a howl The new sun will rise Piercing the skies And the old bear shall awake From his den at daybreak He will stop his slumber As he was resting like a pile of lumber Making an appearance to life While the hunter sneaks up with a knife ~Trevor Marshall

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/26/2016 1:35:00 PM

You are more than a best new poet. You are excellent, wonderful and mind jerking. What a lovely piece this is. Welcome to poetry soup dear colleague.

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2016 11:27:00 AM

Trevor, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moon Flower

Date: 4/27/2016 9:08:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Trevor. :)

Trevor Marshall
Date: 4/28/2016 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Moon Flower

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/27/2016 12:49:00 PM

Hi Traver, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Trevor Marshall
Date: 4/28/2016 10:39:00 AM

Thank you aswell

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2016 11:52:00 AM

Trevor, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Trevor Marshall
Date: 4/28/2016 10:40:00 AM

Sounds Great I will check out your page and the contest (: