Old

New
fresh, green
invigorating, exciting, lilting
sprout, sunrise, harvest, sunset
wilting, rotting, rusting
wrinkled, stale
old
© Mar 05 2010 Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 5, 2010 at 8:15 PM
Charles~ I like the form you used to describe "Old" it was very clever! Laura :)
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