Oklahoma Summer

Warm mud between toes
Red Oklahoma shoreline
   Summer on the lake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 7:19 PM
Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane
Augustus Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Haiku Seasons contest.
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May 1, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in the haiku contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Karen
Moreno Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:11 AM
Nice work Anna and congrats with your HM in the contest...Raul
Townsend Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 11:45 PM
As I said before great writing. Congratulations on the Honorable Mention in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
Townsend Avatar
April 25, 2009 at 10:44 AM
Aww yes the red dirt of Oklahoma... a beautiful site I have heard. I can picture it so clearly in my mind. Living in Kansas I am not too far to make a journey to see this inspiring site. Thank you for this write as it encourages me to get moving toward that journey. Great writing. Smiles from Lolita~ thank you for your lovely comments, we had storms here at the time that I wrote my "Spring Storm" Choka, nature is so inspirational.
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April 22, 2009 at 4:50 PM
Sounds like a fun way to spend a summer afternoon. Nice view. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Moreno Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 10:48 AM
Wow, loved the it, but the middle line is excellent. it stole my heart. This one is going in my fav's...Raul
Lopez Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 10:32 AM
thank you for supporting my contest ....alopez
Fuller Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 9:19 AM
crawdads scooting fast shooting towards their tunnel tower evading the fish wow! you just put me in a zone and this is how I roll :) you do great work, sorry I'm being silly!
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