Oil In the Water

She's oil in the water, that refuses to blend
With a hair tie on her wrist, embracing the wind

Pleasantly dowdy, breaking rules out of spite
Above laws and limitations.  She knows when she's right 

Don't go and dare her,  she'll do as you please
Just proof to herself, it's fit how she sees

She's never lukewarm, laid back or fickle
It's out of her norm, to feel, just a little

Emotions come in floods of passion and cause
Either, taking her breath, or not there at all

If her aloofness is bothersome and you're pained with concern
Ask and she'll admit, it was too insignificant to be learned

You can't make her debate over anything political
She doesn't care, either way.  Not even a little 

Her mind is closed shut, accepting no visitors
If you don't live inside, you don't exist to her

A small minded person?  Not even close
Pick at her brain.  She'll give you a dose

A hardy helping of knowledge, about what she pursues 
accrued information.  Advice you can use

Sure, she's a challenge from a different planet
She doesn't ask for acceptance, but will quickly demand it 

This is her world, you're merely a guest
A Martian for entertainment at its very best
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rigoler Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Many people like what you've described, Anna. I'm not unkind to them because change is always possible. Otherwise I stay clear of them. Many thanks for reading my "Childhood Snow." All of us see familiar things very differently. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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December 24, 2017 at 8:49 AM
Great piece Anna...you give us a good dose every write
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