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Oh Where Oh Where Did Daddy Go

A Dream Clutches An UnMolded Heart, Where Sleepless Nights UnFold. You Walked Away UnTammed And UnLeashed Memories That Fade, Only ReDefines It's True Moment Under A Shadow Of ReFlection. Among These Children Who Don't Know; You Won't ReTurn, A Little Heart Cracked Can't ExPlain Oh Where; Oh Where Did DADDY Go?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/1/2012 11:37:00 AM
Wow..this is deeply sad..love your expression..intense!!
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Date: 5/28/2012 5:13:00 PM
this piece brings back memories.my dad died when I was 12,I can tell you where daddy went,HEAVEN....
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Date: 5/1/2012 7:29:00 AM
Wonderful work and congrats on feature....Patrick
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Date: 5/1/2012 5:35:00 AM
A sad poem and a sad fact of life today. awesome poem Carma
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 5/17/2012 11:51:00 PM
" Thank You " for your feed back on this it is a blessing.
Date: 4/30/2012 12:04:00 AM
Lovely written poem, well done carma!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/10/2012 5:11:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Carma. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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