Oh, To Remember

They are fading, fading swiftly as a wisp of smoke.
My memory clouds, and I can’t remember.
Who are these fellow servicemen? 
Sure, I can see their faces, clear as a crystal lake.
But who are they?  All their names elude me as 
I struggle, yet nothing comes to me.
From basic training to Vietnam, everyone I knew
Now gone in a slow fade into nothingness.
Oh, to remember their names to go with the faces I already see.
The years have taken my memory and left only pictures.
But even the pictures are starting to slowly disappear into that fog.
Each day there is more fog and less clarity in a mind that still knows 
Of each individual and where I knew them from. 
The fading never stops, never ceases and will never return a clear view.
I am alone; alone in a misty, fog-laden prison without bars 
From which I can not escape, but only lingering in a place 
Where those faces and names will slowly and surely die, as I will die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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January 30, 2019 at 1:58 PM
I found this so profund, deep emotions and feelings, wavering in the dreams that pervade our souls. Well done. To those who served, God's blessings.
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