Oh, Those Clouds

lowering fleecy
          in the magellanic clouds
          precision floating


  
              May, 23 2020
                8pm PST
         
               Poem# 1, 292
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Mcintosh Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Lovely write, dear friend. Love to you always and blessings too, Gina
Romios Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 4:00 PM
Happy Lord's Day, dear Poetess.. Thank you so much! Your comment brightens this already glorious day.... Celebrate life, Panagiota
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May 24, 2020 at 9:09 AM
This is great Panagiota as I am always fascinated by the shapes and fluffiness of clouds, though no expert! I love how some days it looks as though an artist has lightly brushed over the sky, for they look so delicate & another time they are big gregarious smiley clouds and you wonder how they stay put, haha... great haiku my friend, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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May 24, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Greetings, Ann! I too marvel at nature. It's no accident that there is such beauty and complexity. Like you, no expert am I in the sciences. Simply stunned by its beauty. Clouds are serene for the most part. At least where I live. I take pictures of clouds and rainbows on my iPad. Stunning!thank and may you see gregarious smiley ones. Panagiota xxoo ^*^
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May 24, 2020 at 2:43 AM
Yes, Panagiota, clouds often attract our attention and we look to them for inspiration. Indeed theirs is "precision floating", probably till strong winds play havoc with them and ruin their serenity! Magellanic clouds was a superb choice for clouds that sail and explore, much like the great explorer. ~ Best regards // paul
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May 24, 2020 at 2:55 AM
Paul! Heavens! What a gift you have at not just poetry, but excellence in writing! I am blown away as a cloud, now.-)). I applaud your originality and analysis. Beats one or two words. Very glad you enjoyed this! Appreciatively, Panagiota..,on a cloud!
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