Oh, Those Clouds

lowering fleecy in the magellanic clouds precision floating May, 23 2020 8pm PST Poem# 1, 292

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/24/2020 3:52:00 PM

Lovely write, dear friend. Love to you always and blessings too, Gina

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/24/2020 4:00:00 PM

Happy Lord's Day, dear Poetess.. Thank you so much! Your comment brightens this already glorious day.... Celebrate life, Panagiota

Ann Gilmour

Date: 5/24/2020 9:09:00 AM

This is great Panagiota as I am always fascinated by the shapes and fluffiness of clouds, though no expert! I love how some days it looks as though an artist has lightly brushed over the sky, for they look so delicate & another time they are big gregarious smiley clouds and you wonder how they stay put, haha... great haiku my friend, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/24/2020 10:38:00 AM

Greetings, Ann! I too marvel at nature. It's no accident that there is such beauty and complexity. Like you, no expert am I in the sciences. Simply stunned by its beauty. Clouds are serene for the most part. At least where I live. I take pictures of clouds and rainbows on my iPad. Stunning!thank and may you see gregarious smiley ones. Panagiota xxoo ^*^

Paul Callus

Date: 5/24/2020 2:43:00 AM

Yes, Panagiota, clouds often attract our attention and we look to them for inspiration. Indeed theirs is "precision floating", probably till strong winds play havoc with them and ruin their serenity! Magellanic clouds was a superb choice for clouds that sail and explore, much like the great explorer. ~ Best regards // paul

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/24/2020 2:55:00 AM

Paul! Heavens! What a gift you have at not just poetry, but excellence in writing! I am blown away as a cloud, now.-)). I applaud your originality and analysis. Beats one or two words. Very glad you enjoyed this! Appreciatively, Panagiota..,on a cloud!