Oh That I Could Be

I’ve walked among its people, tasted foods:
paella, soups, *horchata, and so much more.
I’ve visited Retiro Park, seen art
in sculptures on its streets that I adore.

I’ve visited its shops and restaurants
where dancers of flamenco hypnotize,
its rings for fighting bulls, its theaters.
These things I got to see with my own eyes.

I’ve taken buses all around Madrid
and learned so much there. Oh, that I could be
a youth again, enjoying its romance
and all its sites so beautiful to me!

*horchata is a special drink in summertime. It tasted to me like a watermelon smoothie,nothing like Mexican horchata made of rice milk. Spain’s is made from the roots of a plant called sledge.

Jan. 1, 2023
For the  Take Me There Poetry Contest of Margarita Lillico

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Date: 1/22/2023 8:33:00 AM
A new Mexican restaurant/tavern opened in town. I hope to find either version of horchata to tickle my fancy--if not, Hilo to Spain it is. An enjoyable rhyme, Andrea, with my compliments, Aloha William
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Date: 1/22/2023 5:48:00 AM
Thanks Andrea for a youthful spin to a Spanish sojourn! Our pre Covid planned trip was intended to Madrid and Barcelona. One day:)
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Date: 1/21/2023 11:36:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me vicariously visit the place, too. God bless you.
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Date: 1/2/2023 1:33:00 AM
Lovely poem. My biggest disappointment is never going to Spain. Now I'm too old and sick to travel.
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Date: 1/1/2023 9:07:00 PM
Very nice, Andrea. Happy New Year.
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Date: 1/1/2023 5:35:00 PM
A trip down memory lane, Lovely write Andrea, Hugs
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Date: 1/1/2023 1:40:00 PM
Such a beautiful, picturesque poem, Andrea:-) GL in the contest!
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