Oh Take My Love

Oh take my Love and sail away to some exotic place. A distant shore where palms grow tall and winds blow soft with grace. Oh take my Love away with you, in soft caressing hands and cherish it, both day and night in far off distant lands. Oh take my Love, far, far away - but just before you go; and will you take the rest of me? I’d rather like to know! ~
For Sandy's 'Valentine Poem' Competition.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 11, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Charles,, Congratulations with your sweet Valentines poem *luv~PD
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February 11, 2013 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win on this very lovely Valentines poem Charles! love/hugs, Leonora
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February 10, 2013 at 8:28 PM
congrats :-) SandyIvy
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February 1, 2013 at 6:05 AM
A lovely verse, Charles! - Nice to read a poem from you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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