Oh My Daddy

One day I realized a potter, who nurtured me with a slight jack,

And I found a jotter, which was plain some years back,

Now I felt why he hates the flying kites,

Why he stopped me trying bikes,

Why I fought to get a ride,

Why I brought to play at sight,

Everything is so clear now,

Why so lately have I vision to see a dhow,

One day I found a shade, that was bigger than I ever had,

And I felt it is on me since my birth, It bind me like a girth,  

Now I felt why I am stable still,

Who always check me to be an istle,

This is not a mystery to be said,

This is a history to be made,

This is not my sorrow not my guilt,

Oh my dad you make me built,

I am far but I can feel how you love me always to heal,

Oh my daddy I was a fool, I will ever be your lovely pool,  

I never let you lose your meld; I never allow my love to mend, .
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Agustin Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 22, 2016 at 2:02 PM
Shrikant Sharma, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 31, 2015 at 11:05 PM
SS, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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July 25, 2011 at 10:53 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup...enjoy the site as u continue to share creative poetry with luv..
Brown Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 7:02 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Shrikant. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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July 24, 2011 at 7:07 PM
Nice dedication and tribute you have paid here, shrikant
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