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Oh Mother

Oh mother ! Forgive me you were right, I don't belong to this cruel world. .. Oh mother ! I'm feeling lost , I'm burning from deep down and yet feeling so cold... Oh mother ! Forgive me I haven't listened to your words. .. Didn't know that even the dearest could be like poisoned swords... Oh mother ! I know it's not your fault, but I wish you never birthed me... Mother I can't live on this hell so forgive me for changing my own destiny... I'll hold death so tight and I'll kiss him a deep strong kiss... I'll lay my head on the shoulder of my mother nature and wear the white dress... Mother forgive me for being so blind ,for being so fool... But I've tried to be so strong for your sake but life was too cruel... Mama I don't even know who I am anymore... I've lost my strength , my faith , I've lost my core... Mama please make it stop it hurts so bad , please stop the pain... Return me to the hands of God and save me from this evil hurricane... Mama please don't cry , you know your tears are so precious... Believe me I've tried my best but their daggers were too vicious... Just please hold me for one more time and then let me go , let me say goodbye... You should be happy for me mama , after all death didn't choose me , I chose to die...

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Chris Green

Date: 11/23/2016 6:57:00 AM

This poem is deeply sad and I feel a certain desperation along with a desire to be free from the endless pains that engulf, but, these pains, though heavy burdens will someday be gone, floating on an sorrowed breeze as it soars to a new and distant destination. I hope this feeling is only temporary and the sun meets your smile again before too long.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/23/2016 8:23:00 AM

You have no idea how happy I get when I read such as beautiful and lovely comments as this , I get delighted when I know that someone has received my feelings (the feelings in the poem ) and be able to understand them and feel them , yesterday was better and I was happy once again, I appreciate your sweet lovely words / / hugs :)

White Sage

Date: 11/20/2016 11:29:00 AM

This piece stabs my heart, I can see so much sorrow and pains being radiated in it, Dalia, I know you ain't giving up, I know you're strong, I know you'll survive it all. write away the pains my dear, let them be drained from your mind through your poems, even though they are sad, they're still beautiful. stay well my dear, wishing you better days ahead...

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/20/2016 12:28:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for your uplifting words they mean so much of course and I'll always keep writing what I'm feeling and what's in my heart even if nobody's liked it or felt it , even if I have one reader I'm thrilled and I'm in a bless as long as there is someone out there who understand what I'm writing and able to receive the feelings that's in my poems I'm thankful// hugs :)