Connie Marcum Wong Poet Verse

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Oh Master

Oh beloved teacher
I'm just finding my wings
So I too may soar the
ethers guided by you,
Fragmented and floating.

© Connie Marcum Wong
Mystique Contest
June 7,2015
#1—connection with a supreme   source …

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Pandita Sietesantos July 28, 2015 at 11:58 AM This is one beautiful, magnificent piece, Connie! Congratulations on your big win! Well-deserved! It's a 7! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2015 at 11:58 PM Superb imagery Connie n a great win! Big congrats!

Shadow Hamilton July 25, 2015 at 6:45 PM great imagery Connie congrats on place hugs

Lee Carter July 25, 2015 at 5:10 PM Pretty image wings and soaring Congrats on your win! ~ lee

Paul Callus July 25, 2015 at 5:05 PM This has an Oriental feel to it, Connie! You have surely found your wings, enough to fly high!! Congratulations:) Hugs // paul Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2015 at 10:20 PM Well, I do lean that way Paul after being married to my Chinese/Hawaiian husband for over 33 years. Thanks so much Paul. Hugs, Connie

Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 5:01 PM simply beautiful Connie - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2015 at 10:20 PM Thank you very much Jan! Hugs, Connie

Skat A July 25, 2015 at 3:13 PM Connie, congrats on your win. SKAT Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2015 at 3:15 PM Thank you SCAT!

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2015 at 10:58 AM Gosh,I missed this one? Or maybe you posted it elsewhere and I saw it? Anyway, it is really good, connie and you deserved this win! Congrats Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2015 at 3:19 PM Thank you Andrea. I believe I posted it at PFT. I appreciate your sweet comment! Hugs, Connie

Eve Roper July 25, 2015 at 10:13 AM Connie, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2015 at 3:17 PM Thank you very much Eve. This one is close to my heart.

Emile Pinet July 20, 2015 at 11:54 AM This is good, full of imagination and intrigue. An outpouring of feelings surges up from the soul and takes flight. Emile. #7 Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2015 at 3:16 PM Thank you very much Emile.

Phyllis Babcock July 8, 2015 at 2:25 PM Beautiful one Connie. Have not done a contest in quite a while so should have a look at some posted. love phyl Connie Marcum Wong July 9, 2015 at 12:23 PM I would like to do more contests but I need to be inspired. Thanks a lot Phyllis. Love, Connie

Tim Smith July 8, 2015 at 11:57 AM This has a Zen feel to it Connie. I think it will do well in the contest...Tim Connie Marcum Wong July 9, 2015 at 12:20 PM Thank you Tim. What a nice comment! I appreciate it. Blessings, Connie

Afolabi Muideen July 8, 2015 at 4:23 AM An excellent write, I like your write and the pic. Good luck.............A.M Connie Marcum Wong July 8, 2015 at 5:10 AM Thank you very much A.M. I will have to see if you entered one too. Mahalo, Connie

Ilene Bauer July 7, 2015 at 8:29 PM this is wonderful, connie! best of luck in the contest... Connie Marcum Wong July 8, 2015 at 2:06 AM Thank you Ilene. I am not exactly sure what she is looking for. Very nice to hear from you. I hope you are well. Hugs, Connie