Oh, Lovely and Adored One

Oh, lovely and adored one...
descend as a star
over the top of a pine
to hear my guitar!
  

Oh, Lovely and adored one...
let love inflame us 
as the moon wanders alone
amid haze and clouds!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 21, 2012 at 11:17 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this Monday afternoon Andrew. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful fun loving week and keep the old pen flowing. Love, Carol
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May 20, 2012 at 3:09 PM
Romantic and beautiful poem Andrew. - oxox Anne-Lise
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May 20, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Andrew, I love the scene you created in this poem: two lovers staring up at the sky. Very beautiful poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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